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Inglés Escribir Ejercicio (Todos los Niveles)

Curso 202, Unidad 9, Lección 1

Como te fue en el día

Instrucciones: Usando el vocabulario aprendido en esta lección, describe como te fue en el día. ¿Que hora es en este momento? ¿Que hora era hace 20 minutos? ¿A que hora te levantaste? ¿A que hora te fuiste a dormir?

sheepyoung's envío: Puntuación promedio:
Cafes and Bars become more and more popular in China. Friends and classmates often have gathering in these places. They order cafe, bear and some nuts. While the business men usually choose teahouse, because the environment in teahouse is quietly and benefit of building the business ralationship between them successfully. Drinking tes is a kind of culture, which has a long history in China. There are many plenty of tea plants in Southern of China. Chinese people drink tea without sugar. Drinking way and tea set are also to have their culture. Of course, good tea has good price.
I like drinking weak tea and fruit juice. They are healthy to your body. Especially juice, I think, is very good for female. It contains various vitamins as well as prandial fiber, and make female more healthy and pretty. That is also the reason that I like eating fruits very mcuh.
But now, I want to drink a large mango sorbet, as it is too hot~
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  • Dulsineya
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    Coffee, beer

    atmosphere quiet

    is successful

    a lot of or plenty o f

    Southern China or in the south of China

    a female

    makes

    much

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  • mikeinspain
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    Cafes and Bars become more and more popular in China. Friends and classmates often have gathering in these places. They order coffee, beer and some nuts. While the business men usually choose a teahouse, because the environment in a teahouse is quietly and helps to building the business ralationship between them successfully. Drinking tea is a kind of culture which has a long history in China. There are many plenty ofof tea plants in Southern China. Chinese people drink tea without sugar. How you drink your tea and the tea set you use is also a cultural thing. Of course, good tea has a high price. I like drinking weak tea and fruit juice. They are healthy for your body. Especially juice, I think, is very good for females. It contains various vitamins as well as fibre, and makes females more healthy and pretty. That is also the reason that I like eating fruits very much. But now, I want to drink a large mango sorbet, as it is too hot~ Excellent work, sheepyoung, and very informative

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