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Inglés Escribir Ejercicio (Todos los Niveles)

Curso 101, Unidad 1, Lección 5

Describiendo objetos

Instrucciones: Describe los objetos sobre los cuales aprendiste en esta lección. Utiliza tanto atributos afirmativos como negativos. Por ejemplo, hay cinco edificios. Dos edificios son verdes. Tres edificios no son verdes. Son negros.

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I am a studentin Gread Ten now .When I was very young I wished I could become a vet because I like animals. I think diseases is a way by which the nature can control the population.But to animals,especially the endanger ones,things are a little different.Then I found if I was just a vat,I can't help a large amount of animals especially wild ones,at that time I always spent some time watching TV program about the earth to see thoes animals which lived far away from me.And I admired Jane Goodall very much,I want to join WWF,to be a vounteer. As time went by,I still want to help animals but I bacame crazy about astronomy,at that time I was about twelve.I believe there must be U.F.O.and E.T. and I want to find them.Now at school,I like maths and physics and chemistry very much,(but I will never do experimental on animals such as little mince.)I can't say what I will become in the furture but I think nobody's dream is absurd.I wish good luck to everybody who wants to do good for our earth.
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  • Chynna
    Mochapoints: 107217  |  Puntos Profesor: 103536
    I am a student in the tenth grade now. When I was very young I wished I could become a vet because I like animals. I think disease is a way by which nature can control the population of a species. But to animals, especially the endangered ones, things are a little different. Then I found that if I was just a vet, I wouldn't be able to help a large number of animals, especially wild ones. At that time, I always spent time watching TV programs about the earth to see those animals, which lived far away from me. And I admired Jane Goodall very much. I want to join WWF, to be a volunteer. As time went by, I still wanted to help animals, but I became crazy about astronomy, I was about twelve. I believed there must be U.F.O.'s and E.T.'s and I wanted to find them. Now at school, I like math, physics and chemistry very much, but I will never do experimental on animals such as little mice. I can't say what I will become in the future, but I think nobody's dream is absurd. I wish good luck to everybody who wants to do good for our earth. Please put a space after any punctuation mark.
    Enviado hace un año

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