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Inglés Escribir Ejercicio (Todos los Niveles)

Curso 202, Unidad 10, Lección 1

Describe tu ropa

Instrucciones: Usando el vocabulario de esta lección, describe la ropa que estas usando en este momento. ¿De que está hecha? ¿Cómo te vistes para ir al trabajo? ¿Qué te pones para ir a eventos o fiestas? ¿Cuál es tu atuendo favorito?

Lukas's envío: Puntuación promedio:
I think that my country is very cultural and historical rich and tourists can see here many interesting things. It still belongs among the developing countries so many things here are cheaper than in western Europe. The only and probably the biggest problem is that not many people know about my homeland. You can't find many advertisements of my country. We have what to offer to tourists, but we don't know how to offer it.

I really like the beauties of this land. You can do here so many different sports, I guess that the most favourite is skiing. Older tourists can visit historical parts of cities or there is even one old wooden village, where you can see how the life was going three hundred years before.

Slovakia is also well-know for its spas. We have many mineral streams and also a big resources of water. If I were a tourist I would definitely visit them. It's a perfect place for relaxation.
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  • RP
    Mochapoints: 13173  |  Puntos Profesor: 3077
    Excellent submission. Very interesting and with practice I can tell that you will become more fluent quite quickly. I will re-write your submission with some changes that you can examine, but your version is fine and easily understandable. Well done. - I think that my country is very culturally and historically rich, where tourists can see many interesting things. It still, however, belongs among the developing countries, so many things are cheaper here than in western Europe. Probably the biggest (and perhaps, only) problem is that not many people have knowledge of my homeland. You can not find much advertisement for my country. We have what to offer tourists, but we do not know how to offer it. I really like the beauty of this land. You can do so many different sports here, though I would guess that the most popular is skiing. Older tourists can visit the historical areas of cities, or there is even an old wooden village, where you can see how life was taking place three hundred years ago. Slovakia is also well known for its spas. We have many mineral streams and also large resources (reservoirs?) of water. If I were a tourist I would definitely visit them. They are a perfect place for relaxation.
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  • Shirley-小颖
    Mochapoints: 149  |  Puntos Profesor: 22 (0%)

    an excerllent introduction of your motherland !I can't help visiting it !
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  • lilu225
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    Perfektné, len ti trošku unikla podstata  tohto cvičenia....... hore máš  zadanie.....
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