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Inglés Escribir Ejercicio (Todos los Niveles)

Curso 202, Unidad 10, Lección 5

Describe las herramientas de tu hogar

Instrucciones: Menciona algunas herramientas que tienes en casa. ¿Cuáles son? ¿Dónde las compraste? ¿Con que frecuencia las usas? ¿Cuál fue la última herramienta que usaste y para que la usaste?

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Today is wednesday, 2009 april 22, autumn season. The weather is cloudy (maybe it rains later), not so cold (at least to me), the temperature will be oscillating between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, São Paulo state.
Tomorrow, as i can see on this site: ctmail@climatempo.net , it will be similar today.
Well... i must confess that i appeciate too much this kind of weather and the autumn season too.
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  • Graham
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    Today is Wednesday, April 22nd 2009 april 22, and it is autumn season. The weather is cloudy (maybe it will rain later), not so cold (at least to for me), the temperature will be oscillating between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, São Paulo state. Tomorrow, as I can see on this site: ctmail@climatempo.net , it will be similar to today. Well... I must confess that I really appreciate too much this kind of weather and the autumn season too.

    Good effort.

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  • Daniel
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    It's autumn season and today is Wednesday 22nd April, 2009. The weather is cloudy (it will probably rain later), not too cold (at least for me), the temperature will be varying between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, SP.  Tomorrow, the weather will be sililiar to todays' as predicted on the website:ctmail@climatempo.net ,  Well... I must confess that I really love  this kind of weather and the autumn season.

    Hope you like this style of writing.

    Daniel

     

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  • Daniel
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    It's autumn season and today is Wednesday 22nd April, 2009. The weather is cloudy (it will probably rain later), not too cold (at least for me), the temperature will be varying between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, SP.  Tomorrow, the weather will be sililiar to todays' as predicted on the website:ctmail@climatempo.net ,  Well... I must confess that I really love  this kind of weather and the autumn season.

    Hope you like this style of writing.

    Daniel

     

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  • Daniel
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    It's autumn season and today is Wednesday 22nd April, 2009. The weather is cloudy (it will probably rain later), not too cold (at least for me), the temperature will be varying between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, SP.  Tomorrow, the weather will be sililiar to todays' as predicted on the website:ctmail@climatempo.net ,  Well... I must confess that I really love  this kind of weather and the autumn season.

    Hope you like this style of writing.

    Daniel

     

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  • Daniel
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    It's autumn season and today is Wednesday 22nd April, 2009. The weather is cloudy (it will probably rain later), not too cold (at least for me), the temperature will be varying between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, SP.  Tomorrow, the weather will be sililiar to todays' as predicted on the website:ctmail@climatempo.net ,  Well... I must confess that I really love  this kind of weather and the autumn season.

    Hope you like this style of writing.

    Daniel

     

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