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Inglés Escribir Ejercicio (Todos los Niveles)

Curso 101, Unidad 2, Lección 3

¿Qué están haciendo las personas?

Instrucciones: Utilizando atributos tanto afirmativos como negativos, describe lo que están haciendo seis personas: una mujer, un hombre, una niña, un niño, tú y yo. Por ejemplo, yo estoy comiendo en la mesa. Yo no estoy durmiendo en la cama.

Juliana Siqueir...'s envío: Puntuación promedio:
1) The man came home from work, sat at table, read the newspaper that was on the table, while expected the woman. She was bathing, down and met the man, prepared the coffee for him and sat on the couch to talk.

2) I took the box full of candy and put on the table to you. You that was of diet, kept the candies, changed clothes and was running.

3) The girls playing whit the green ball, while the boy sleeping. The boy agreed and entered in the box, to give a scare the girl who played in the room.
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  • ianski
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    1) The man came home from work, sat at table, read the newspaper that was on the table, while expecting the woman. She bathed , went down and met the man. She then prepared the coffee for him and sat on the couch to talk. 2) I took the box full of candy and put on the table to you. You were on  a diet but, kept the candies. You then changed clothes and were running. 3) The girls were playing whith the green ball, while the boy was sleeping. The boy agreed and entered in the box, to give a scare to the girl who played in the room.

    iQue bien!

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  • Manoel Lima
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    1) The man came home from work, sat at table, read the newspaper that was on the table, while expecting the woman. She bathed , went down and met him. Then, she  prepared the coffee for him and sat on the couch to talk. 2) I took the box full of candy and put on the table to you. You were on  a diet but, kept the candies. Then you  changed the clothes and were running. 3) The girls went to play with  green ball, while the boy was sleeping. The boy agreed and entered in the box, to scare the girl who played in the room.

     

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  • Bern
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    Another good submission!  The previous reviewers have made good corrections; here is one more version:

    1) The man came home from work, sat at table, and read the newspaper that was on the table, while waiting for the woman. She was bathing, and later came down and met the man, prepared the coffee for him and sat on the couch to talk. 2) I took the box full of candy and put it on the table for you. You were on a diet, but kept the candies, changed your clothes and went running. 3) The girls were playing with the green ball while the boy was sleeping. The boy agreed and hid in the box to give a scare to the girl who played in the room.

    Again, you make these into little stories, which makes them more interesting!  Each one could develop into a bigger story...

    Nice job!

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