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Inglés Escribir Ejercicio (Todos los Niveles)

Curso 202, Unidad 10, Lección 3

Mi ocupación

Instrucciones: Usando el vocabulario de esta lección, por favor describe tu ocupación. ¿A que te dedicas? ¿Te gusta lo que haces? ¿Cuánto tiempo llevas trabajando en este campo? ¿Siempre quisiste estar en esta ocupación.

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In my city we celebrate Saint Conus Day.
Every June 3rd (which is the traditional birth date of Saint Conus) about 30,000 people from all over the country make their pilgrimage to this place to pay tribute to their beloved saint.
It is a religious and popular celebration where the people visit the Chapel and take part in the pilgrimage trough the principal streets.However, there are many other activities in the week
in my country Carnival is a popular celebration The Uruguayan Carnival is the longest in the world; the celebrations take place during an entire month (on February). Murga and candombre are interesting and, unique cultural expressions The Murga is a Montevidean musical theater for Carnival celebrations with high content of humor and satire on the social and political events of the day. Candombe through the streets of Montevideo: the singers sharing their hearts through the music.
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  • rafawzi
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    Congatulations! This is a wonderful work.

    Please Keep on writing.

    I would like to read all oif your works.

    Regards.

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  • Esiliva
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    In my city, we celebrate Saint Conus Day. Every June 3rd (which is the traditional birth date of Saint Conus), about 30,000 people from all over the country make their pilgrimage here to pay tribute to their beloved saint. It is a religious and popular celebration where the people visit the Chapel and take a part in the pilgrimage's carnaval that it walks through the main streets. However, there are many other activities during that week in my country. Carnival is a popular celebration. The Uruguayan Carnival is one of the longest period festival in the world; the celebration takes place for an entire month (usually in February). Murga and Candombre are interesting and unique cultural expressions. The Murga is a Montevidean musical theater of the carnival celebrations with high content of humor and satire on the social and political events of the day. Candombe walks through the streets of Montevideo when the singers sharing what they feels through the music.

    That's an interesting story. Good job Maria! :)

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  • Rainie
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    In my city we celebrate Saint Conus Day. Every June 3rd (which is the traditional birth date of Saint Conus) about 30,000 people from all over the country make their pilgrimage to this place to pay tribute to their beloved saint. It is a religious and popular celebration where the people visit the Chapel and take part in the pilgrimage through the principal streets. However, there are many other activities in the during week. in my country Carnival is also a popular celebration. The Uruguayan Carnival is the longest in the world The celebrations take place during an entire month (on February). Murga and candombre are interesting and, unique cultural expressions. The Murga is a Montevidean musical theater for Carnival celebrations with high content of humor and satire, on the social and political events of the day. Candombe through the streets of Montevideo: has the singers sharing their hearts through the music.

    Well done Maria.

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  • Maria
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    Thank you for the comments!!!

     

    I appreciate that!!! :)

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  • Star
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    Wow! What a interesting carnival!

    I'm agree with the other corrections. It was so nice to read your writting. 

    Very good job!!!

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  • jrb
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    Good. I agree with others.

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